考研江湖流傳一句話:得閱讀者得天下,失作文者失江山。 考研寫作所有的技巧面對(duì)“考場(chǎng)時(shí)間”這把殺豬刀,會(huì)顯得尤其蒼白無(wú)力,考場(chǎng)上爭(zhēng)分奪秒,往往提前準(zhǔn)備好的模板才是你最后的“殺手锏”。所有想要逆天而為,試圖挑戰(zhàn)自我,臨場(chǎng)發(fā)揮的同學(xué),都很有可能倒在語(yǔ)法、詞匯、結(jié)構(gòu)等等方面。也就是說(shuō) ,在考場(chǎng)上,你寫的每一句話一定是提前準(zhǔn)備的。 考研作文模板怎么準(zhǔn)備?今天就直指要害,教你如何用模板。 滿滿干貨,可以轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)給身邊需要的小伙伴 首段 “骨肉相連”描圖三步走 1. 骨架+小肉(整體描圖) 2. 多汁大肉(詳細(xì)描圖) 3. 翻譯中文/萬(wàn)能句型 注意事項(xiàng): - 小肉為整體描圖,切記不要描述細(xì)節(jié);
- 多汁大肉為細(xì)節(jié)描述,靈活使用從句、分詞以及修飾詞讓描圖豐滿;
- 萬(wàn)能句型屬于無(wú)奈之舉,根據(jù)前兩句的字?jǐn)?shù)來(lái)確定是否使用。
例如: 2003年 Depicted in these two cartoons above is a flower showing different states in two entirely distinct conditions.此句開(kāi)篇,結(jié)構(gòu)至關(guān)重要,此處用倒裝句描圖,Depicted in these two cartoons above is+圖片核心元素+分詞短語(yǔ)修飾。 As is shown in the first picture, the flower, placed in a comfortable greenhouse which shelters it from the threatening storm, is in full bloom. On the contrary, when exposed to the heavy rain, the flower soon fades and withers, with petals falling on the ground.As is shown in the first picture在所有的模板書均可找到,因此千萬(wàn)不要放在第一句,但是如此漂亮的As引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句不用豈不可惜,因此調(diào)整順序,放在第二句即可,顯示出你支配語(yǔ)言的能力。2003年為兩幅圖(今年的重點(diǎn)復(fù)習(xí)方向),因此要注意兩幅圖之間的對(duì)比關(guān)系,用on the contrary強(qiáng)調(diào)句間關(guān)系。其中分詞作狀語(yǔ)、定語(yǔ)從句、獨(dú)立主格皆可以用于其他文章,舉一反三。 圖片的核心元素為一個(gè)小男孩兒/小女孩兒,當(dāng)然性別并不重要,年輕人也沒(méi)問(wèn)題,他在跑道上奔跑,這些便是第一句整體描圖的內(nèi)容。細(xì)節(jié)信息為:跑道上標(biāo)著終點(diǎn)的地方也有兩個(gè)字“起點(diǎn)”,圖畫下面的標(biāo)題為:終點(diǎn)又是新起點(diǎn),比較好翻譯。1. 骨架+小肉:Emerging from the cartoon is an eye-catching scene that a young man is running on the road to the future, with sweat pouring down from his face.骨架模板“Emerging from the cartoon is an eye-catching scene that…”,此處 eye-catching可以替換為其他詞匯;小肉為“主謂賓+獨(dú)立主格”的模式,只要圖片內(nèi)容為 “路”,均可使用“running on the road to the future”來(lái)表示。 2. 大肉:After a long journey, he is making the final spurt toward the finishing line, but straight ahead lies a sign which indicates a new starting point urging him to continue rushing to the next destination.這句話為詳細(xì)描圖,可以使勁渾身解數(shù)讓句子變長(zhǎng)。練習(xí)時(shí)需要先確定句子的主干he is making the final spurt toward the finishing line,but 后面為倒裝句,真正的主語(yǔ)為a sign, 目的是與后面的which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句相連,這類倒裝句在表示“在什么地方有什么東西”時(shí)可以通用?!皍rging him to continue rushing to the next destination”為分詞做后置定語(yǔ)修飾前面名詞point。 3. 翻譯中文:The caption in the drawing reads “a terminal point is also the departure point”。如果第二句寫的不夠長(zhǎng),則可以用第三句補(bǔ)充。 特別提醒:平時(shí)的描圖練習(xí)要盡量做到“絞盡腦汁”擴(kuò)充句子,比如平時(shí)練習(xí)能夠?qū)?0字,估計(jì)考場(chǎng)上緊張過(guò)后就只剩40了,刪詞總比增詞容易。多準(zhǔn)備一些萬(wàn)能模板句,做到以不變應(yīng)萬(wàn)變,考場(chǎng)上只需要替換某一些主題詞匯就可以拿分,記?。?/section>考研英語(yǔ)寫作不怕假大空,就怕犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤,以個(gè)人品質(zhì)為例,下面的模板就屬于放之四海皆準(zhǔn)。1. 提出中心:The implication of this cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in daily life: XXX is the first step towards success.2. 解釋說(shuō)明:In other words, facing with delicate options, we had better march forward rather than hesitate. Indeed, if we are bewildered with the choices, opportunities may escape our attention.3. 舉例論證:For some people, their fear to lose is greater than their desire to succeed, so they end up doing nothing and their dreams become impossible.4. 正反論證:On the contrary, at any given moment, we have the power to say this is not how the story is going to end. Our braveness, perseverance, and decisiveness may earn us chances to solve current adversities, leading us out of the shadow.5. 總結(jié)中心:Clearly, the cartoonist, through this unique metaphor, encourages us to choose the latter.確保高大上,準(zhǔn)備兩類結(jié)尾:積極正向+消極負(fù)向積極正向:Evidently, there are reasons to believe that主題詞 can produce positive effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to promote international tourism.消極負(fù)向:Evidently, there are reasons to believe that 主題詞can produce negative effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to avoid such phenomenon.說(shuō)起模板,大家一定會(huì)想到,在考研閱卷現(xiàn)場(chǎng)會(huì)出現(xiàn)反模板的傾向。但這個(gè)反模板,并不是反對(duì)所有模板,而是反對(duì)那些千篇一律的模板。不要千篇一律?那最好的辦法,就是有屬于自己的模板。如何創(chuàng)造自己的模板?建議同學(xué)們?cè)跉v年真題閱讀中,找一些高大上的句型,提前改寫,并使用到自己的試卷上,一定會(huì)事半功倍。但是在這個(gè)過(guò)程中,總有同學(xué)會(huì)犯錯(cuò)誤,比如模板中的句型套用不正確,或者模板中的句型和實(shí)際寫作內(nèi)容不匹配等等。怎么找符合要求又高大上的句型?怎么確定自己改寫的作文是否正確?怎么才能擁有專屬自己的,不出錯(cuò)又出彩的高分作文模板?因?yàn)樘嗤瑢W(xué)向老師提出了類似的問(wèn)題,【針對(duì)不同地區(qū)/英語(yǔ)一或英語(yǔ)二】一對(duì)一定制作文模板
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