進入到12月,大多數(shù)同學都迎來了國內的期末考試月,備考雅思的同學也沒有那么多了。但在海外的同學,依然有非常優(yōu)異的出分表現(xiàn)。這位【雅思月計劃】的學員,雖然一再自謙說是在香港考雅思難度沒有大陸那么大,但總分8.0,聽說讀寫四科都上7,閱讀更是拿下滿分的超級成績也是硬實力的絕對體現(xiàn)! 今日寫作考題 Task1: Table:動態(tài)圖(1993年和2003年6個行業(yè)的男女性別比例) Task2: Art classes, like painting and drawing, are as important as other subjects, so they should be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(重復2018.6.28考題) 題目分析 ▼ 本篇文章是由 so 引導的前后兩句話,在審題的時候,很多同學會潛意識地把第一句話當作是背景句,從而只去討論 so 后面地第二句話,這是嚴重的審題錯誤!其實這是一個非常典型的并列結構的文章,題目有兩個需要討論的部分,都需要充分且平衡地討論,這是在【寫作月計劃】中非常詳細給大家講練過的審題要點,審題錯誤的同學會在此處嚴重丟分! 參 考 提 綱 Introduction: I completely disagree with this statement. Body1: Art classes, like painting and drawing, are not so important as other subjects for high school students. - 學好高考相關的學術性科目對于高中生以后的教育,比如進入名牌大學,非常重要。通過學習學術課程,學生們能學到很有多用的技能,比如數(shù)學課能學到 logical skills and analyzing skills,這些技能對于以后的就業(yè)至關重要。 - By contrast,藝術課程,除了能讓學生適當緩解壓力之外,并無多大實際的用處,因此高中生需要花更多的精力和時間在學術課程上。 Body2: The claim that art classes should be mandatory is also unacceptable.
In conclusion, education authorities ought to recognize that art classes are not important to teenagers' development, and they should not be included as part of compulsory curriculum. |
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