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看留言：? 在英語考試中，得語篇者得天下！搞定寫作和語篇，何愁美夢不成真！還沒考試的同學(xué)們快來看看，說不定就押中你們的寫作和語篇了！上名校的夢想一不小心就實現(xiàn)了呢！ 先來看書面表達(dá)！中考書面表達(dá)無非四大類別：寫人敘事類、觀點看法類、做法建議類以及介紹類。 第1篇（2017重慶A卷18分） 照片背后的故事 在過去的日子里，我們曾經(jīng)歡笑，也曾經(jīng)哭泣……照片，或?qū)⑦@些精彩定格，或勾起你對往事的回憶。某英語網(wǎng)站向你發(fā)出邀請。請你按要求用英語寫一篇文章，分享你照片背后的故事。 要求：
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This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, （推薦河南、甘肅、云南、陜西、廣西使用） 【寫作點撥】本文要求圍繞“照片”敘述一個與之相關(guān)的故事，是一篇記敘文。根據(jù)參考要點可知，文章屬于經(jīng)典“三段式”的寫作：1. 描述照片拍攝的時間、地點和人物等基本信息；2. 敘述與照片相關(guān)的故事，包括起因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果等；3. 談?wù)搶κ虑榈母惺?。寫作過程中，要注意時態(tài)的變化：描述過去發(fā)生的事情主要用一般過去時，談?wù)搶κ虑榈母惺苤饕靡话悻F(xiàn)在時。 【高分范文】 This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was 10 while my dad looked younger. Look, we are playing ping pong happily. I used to be a ping pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day’s work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear. I am proud of you!” Now, I spend less time playing ping pong because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. He is proud of me. How lucky I am to be his daughter! 第2篇（2017重慶B卷18分） 征文——我和朋友之間的故事 在我們成長的道路上，朋友是不可或缺的風(fēng)景。在相知相伴的歲月里，留下了多少美好的故事和難忘的回憶！某英語報社以“A Story Between My Friend And Me”為題開展征文活動，請你按要求用英語寫一篇文章參賽。 要求：
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A Story Between My Friend And Me There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. （推薦云南、遼寧使用） 【寫作點撥】本文是一篇命題作文，并給出了參考要點。由題目“A Story Between My Friend and Me”可知寫作的重點在于敘述故事，并表達(dá)感受。寫作時，可選取個人與朋友之間印象深刻，且比較有教育意義的事件。敘述個人故事，要用第一人稱，且時態(tài)主要為一般過去時，表達(dá)感受時，用一般現(xiàn)在時。 【高分范文】 There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me. Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot. In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends. 第3篇（2017浙江舟山20分） 選書的理由 學(xué)校將舉辦“A Summer for Better English”活動，請你從下面的推薦書單中選擇兩本想閱讀的書刊，然后用英語寫一篇短文，在學(xué)校的English Corner分享。
注意： （1）必須從書單中選擇2本書刊，并闡述理由。 （2）文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息。 （3）詞數(shù)：80～100。短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)。 短文首句：To improve our English, the school has given a list of books for us to read this summer. （推薦遼寧使用） 【寫作點撥】本文要求寫一篇表達(dá)觀點的短文?？忌趯懽鲿r，一定要注意題目中要求選擇兩本想閱讀的書刊，因此在陳述理由的時候，要分別針對選擇的兩本書刊說明理由。題目中給出的書刊列表“暗藏玄機(jī)”。左列書刊提高英語語言能力，右列書刊拓展英語文化。考生可針對兩列書刊不同的功能從中選擇兩本，并簡要陳述理由。 【高分范文】 To improve our English,the school has given a list of books for us to read this summer. Of all the suggested books,I have decided to choose Secrets of English Words and Time for Kids. The first one is a book which may help learn English words better. By reading this book, I will surely know more new words. This will make my future study much easier. Time for Kids is a popular magazine specially written for students, in which I will read interesting stories and have a taste of teen life abroad. So it must be great fun reading it. By being part of this activity, I am expecting a big step forward in my English. 第4篇（2017山東泰安20分） 共享單車之我見 如今，很多城市出現(xiàn)了一種綠色出行方式—共享單車（bike-sharing）。它因環(huán)保、便捷而備受青睞，但同時也引發(fā)了一系列問題。請你根據(jù)提示以“Bike-sharing”為題寫一篇英語短文，表達(dá)自己的看法和建議。 要點提示：
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Bike-sharing Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. （推薦河南、陜西和遼寧使用） 【熱點解讀】共享單車是一種自行車共享服務(wù)。自2017年，共享單車在各大城市如雨后春筍般茁壯成長，為人們的出行帶來了極大的便捷，有效地緩解了交通擁堵，也為低碳環(huán)保出了一份力。同時，共享單車也出現(xiàn)了一系列的問題，如亂停亂放，被偷被毀，充值容易退費難等。針對這些問題，各地也推出了一系列的舉措來規(guī)范共享單車的管理。 共享單車是2017年中考命題人的“寵兒”，以不同的形式頻頻出現(xiàn)在各地中考試卷中。考生在繁忙的復(fù)習(xí)備考中，要注重關(guān)注社會熱點，思考社會問題，尤其是與生活息息相關(guān)的熱點。 【寫作點撥】本文要求以“Bike-sharing”為題，根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文，表達(dá)自己對共享單車的看法和建議。寫作時，考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個要點：首先，闡述共享單車的優(yōu)點；其次，列舉共享單車帶來的問題；最后，根據(jù)問題給出個人建議。 【高分范文】 Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It’s known that it has many advantages. So it’s enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it’s very convenient for people to go somewhere. Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise. In this way, it’s helpful to people’s health. However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them , and some bikes are stolen. In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better, and our environment will be more beautiful. 第5篇（2017達(dá)州10分） 如何做一個好學(xué)生 某班英語課上，就“爭當(dāng)中華好少年”進(jìn)行小組交流活動，請你根據(jù)活動記錄情況，以“How to be a great student?”為題，寫一篇英語短文。
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How to be a great student? It’s very important to be a good student. As teenagers, how to be a good student?In my opinion, （推薦廣西和遼寧使用） 【寫作點撥】根據(jù)給出的題目“How to be a great student?”可以判斷題目要求考生寫一篇做法建議類的短文。表格中已經(jīng)給出了具體的做法，考生在寫作時需要圍繞表格中給出的三個方面寫作，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。如：注重個人公眾場合的行為舉止、與同學(xué)互幫互助等。做法建議類文章在寫作時，主要用一般現(xiàn)在時。 【高分范文】 It’s very important to be a good student. As teenagers, how to be a good student? In my opinion，there are lots of things we should do. Firstly, it’s necessary to develop good habits in life and study. For example, we should eat healthily and do much exercise every day. Besides, we should listen to the teacher carefully and finish homework on time. Secondly, be honest. Don’t tell lies and never cheat in tests. Honesty is the best policy. Thirdly, we are supposed to obey the school rules. Don’t go swimming alone without permission, and don’t take mobile phones to school and so on. Finally, we should get on well with our classmates. When someone is in trouble, we should give them a hand. 第6篇 （2017宜賓15分） 如何提高學(xué)習(xí)效率 目前很多學(xué)生整天都忙于學(xué)習(xí)，成績卻不理想。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，結(jié)合自身實際，寫一篇關(guān)于“怎樣提高學(xué)習(xí)效率”的短文。 要求：
How to improve our study effectively A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study. How can we solve the problem? Here are some suggestions. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful. （推薦廣西、陜西和遼寧使用） 【寫作點撥】根據(jù)題目要求可以看出本文是一篇做法建議類的說明文?？忌枰Y(jié)合表格中給出的中英文提示，圍繞“如何提高學(xué)習(xí)效率”寫出具體的做法或建議。寫作時，要注意使用連接詞將各個要點銜接起來，使文章的表達(dá)更流暢自然。除了表格中給出的要點，考生還要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 【高分范文】 How to improve our study effectively A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study. How can we solve the problem? Here are some suggestions. You need to find an effective learning method. Take advantage of class time to listen to the teacher. Taking notes will help you remember what the teachers say. After class, you should review your lessons in time. You should also finish your homework carefully. If you have discovered any mistakes, correct them immediately. This will help you form a good learning habit. Besides, you need to do some exercise. It can not only make you relaxed but also build up your body. All in all, you should make good use of time in studying and relaxation. If you have any problems in your study, you can ask your classmates or teachers for help. If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful. 第7篇（2017金華20分） 分享名著——《老人與?！?/span> 假如你應(yīng)邀參加一個國際讀書會，并將分享自己讀過的一本好書。請根據(jù)下列表格中的要點，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹你要分享的書。
注意： （1）可選擇使用所給的書名及內(nèi)容，也可另選書籍； （2）短文內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)增加； （3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名； （4）詞數(shù)：80~100； （5）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)。 短文首句：The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea. （推薦遼寧使用） 【寫作點撥】根據(jù)題目要求可知本文是一篇說明文，考生需要用英語介紹《老人與?！愤@本國外名著。寫作要點在表格中已經(jīng)給出。寫作時，首先要介紹這本書的基本信息，如作者的名字和國籍；其次，介紹這本書的大概內(nèi)容；最后，介紹為什么喜歡這本書。文章的段落依然呈現(xiàn)“三段式”的結(jié)構(gòu)，層次分明。 【高分范文】 The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea,but finds it hard to take it home.On the way back,he has to fight against the fish,and the sea as well. What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting with difficulties. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book: Man is not made for defeat. This tells us that nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart.(100 words) 第8篇（2017安徽25分） 邀請——參加展演活動 假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校將舉行“弘揚中華傳統(tǒng)文化—戲曲進(jìn)校園”展演活動，你打算邀請你的美國朋友Mike參加。請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。
提示詞：戲曲opera n. 表演 performance n. 注意：
Dear Mike, I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture. Yours, Li Hua （推薦廣西和甘肅使用） 【寫作點撥】本文要求考生寫一封邀請信，邀請美國朋友Mike來參加展演活動。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，考生在寫作時重點關(guān)注如何寫好內(nèi)容。根據(jù)給出的要點，短文中要包含活動的時間、地點和活動內(nèi)容。寫作時，考生需要運用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞將各個要點緊密地連接起來，并根據(jù)想象對活動內(nèi)容做簡要的說明和評價。 【高分范文】 Dear Mike, I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture. Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There is an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1. It will be held on the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performance will be put on. It’s a chance for you to learn more about Chinese traditional culture. Come and join us! I think we’ll have a great time. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua  熱點話題不僅在書面表達(dá)中頻頻“露臉”，在語篇中更是“流連忘返”！不信，快來看！ 第1篇（2017安徽15分） 共享單車有利于城市的健康發(fā)展 Bike-sharing is a new choice for short journeys in cities. It is good to the 1 development of the big cities. A 2 by a company found that shared bikes started the nation’s 3 for bikes again. Now more and more Chinese people are 4 bikes instead of cars to make short journeys in cities. An engineer of that company says that since the 5 of shared bikes, people have made fewer trips by car. The love for shared bikes is not only among 6 people, who were born in the 1980s and 1990s, but also among people over sixty. At weekends, the number of the riders in Shenzhen reaches the 7 of all cities. On weekdays, the number of people who use shared bikes to travel to work is 8 in Shanghai. It is said that bike-sharing will help 9 the cities’ environment. It not only helps solve the traffic problems, but also will help to make more use of 10 in cities. Take Beijing as an example, if more people choose shared bikes, an area of five Bird’s Nest stadiums(體育場) will be saved. 1.A. slow B. healthy C. harmful D. sudden 2. A. rule B. plan C. report D. suggestion 3. A. search B. worry C. preparation D. love 4. A. choosing B. pushing C. repairing D. locking 5. A. end B. start C. control D. fall 6. A. strong B. weak C. old D. young 7. A. top B. side C. corner D. line 8. A. coming over B. putting off C. going up D. giving away 9. A. discover B. separate C. experience D. improve 10. A. air B. time C. space D. money 【主旨大意】本文介紹了一種新的出行方式—共享單車，它重新喚起了國人對自行車的熱愛，有效的減少了汽車的使用，給人們和環(huán)境帶來了很多好處。 【答案】1~5：BCDAB 6~10：DACDC
第2篇（2017邵陽10分） 一帶一路 Maciek Czastka was born in Lodz, Poland. He came to China several years ago. So far, he has been working in Chengdu for three years. “The Belt and Road Initiative(一帶一路的倡議)is meaningful,” he said. “Thanks to it, we are offered more chances.” The most powerful support for Chengdu to thrive(興盛) along the Belt and Road is the Chengdu-Europe express railway(高速鐵路). It provides direct train services between Chengdu and the city of Lodz. Because of the express railway, trains can bring things from China to Europe. At the same time, they can bring back European food, wine, meat and so on. In 2016, a total of 460 trains ran between Chengdu and Europe. The number is expected to grow to 1,000 this year. Since the Chengdu-Lodz express railway was opened, Chengdu, together with other cities in west China, has developed close trade ties with the European country. Poland is one of the largest apple producers in Europe. Czastka’s company helps farmers in Poland sell their apples to China. More and more European products will be sent to China in the future. The Belt and Road Initiative is meaning ful
【主旨大意】本文通過來自波蘭的Maciek Czastka的視角，講述了“一帶一路”給中國和歐洲各大城市帶來了很多便利，促進(jìn)了國家之間的貿(mào)易和經(jīng)濟(jì)往來。 |
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