申申老師備考2017年中考英語作文書寫指導及練習題有答案

前言

從我的教學實踐中得出這樣一個結(jié)論，對于中考英語作文，不光學生本人不重視，甚至是個別老師也不重視。這就造成了很多學生初中英語作文不好，到高中更差。

作文分數(shù)不可小視，你想過么，如果你作文寫不好，一下子就會比別人少10分上下。

那對你的單科成績和總成績的影響可以說是致命的。

有時候看到一些水文，什么背會他們給出的作文套話，就能考上哈佛，北大的，我真TM想笑，你們發(fā)這些水文的家伙，你們是老師們？你們教過學生么？

作文的提高不是你背會多少句套話，多少的范文就能夠達成的。

那么我給出的方法是：

第一，作文的提高需要作為學生的你們在日常學習生活中多觀察身邊發(fā)生的事物，試著去用自己的語言加以描述。省的考試時候沒話說。

第二，把你課本上文章研讀透就夠了?，F(xiàn)在有多少學校的老師在課上根本就不講課文。

上來就是一通板書，然后告訴孩子們重點就在黑板上了，抄下去回家背，這樣講課的老師現(xiàn)在太多太多了。如果能看懂你板書的孩子，他還用你教么？反過來，為什么那么多學生不愛學習英語，就是因為你們這樣講課使勁灌知識點，而不去給學習詳細講解。

最后，還有一些老師要么直接刷題，要么課下自己辦班偷著講，我呸！

第三，最后也是最重要的方法。就是一定要自己親自動手寫作文。

我的建議是初中生每周最少自己寫2篇作文（可以一大一?。?/strong>

高中生每周自己寫一篇作文就可以。

具體方法：買本作文書，自己先寫，然后隔一天修改自己寫的作文直到滿意，在參考作文答案進行修改。最后把自己寫的作文修改到完美狀態(tài)。

申申老師一句話總結(jié)：堅持自己寫作文才是提高成績的王道。

下面都是2016年中考英語作文原題

自己寫寫練練吧

第一篇書面表達（本題有1小題，共計20分）

針對大部分高中要求學生住校的現(xiàn)狀，英語課上同學們就“Would you like to live in school?”這一話題展開調(diào)查。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，匯報調(diào)查結(jié)果，表達你的意愿并闡述理由。

注意：1．短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當增加細節(jié);

2．你的理由至少兩條；

3．詞數(shù)：80-100；

4．短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計人總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：方便的convenient

短文首句：Would you like to live in school? We had a survey about it and here's the result.

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答案One possible version

Would you like to live in school? We had a survey about it and here's the result. Most students prefer to live in schoo

l because they find it convenient to communicate with their classmates. Also, they can learn how to look after themselves in this way.

However, some students think living at home is a better choice. The main reason is that they can relax better at home. Besides, they can spend more time with their family members and get on better with them.

As for me, I'd like to live in school. That's because I can spend more time on study. What's more, it's a wonderful experience to live with other classmates. (96 words)

第二篇書面表達（15分）

隨著外國游客日益增多，未來科技館決定選拔部分中學生在假期為他們提供英語講解任務(wù)?？萍拣^需要應(yīng)征者提交英文自薦信。假如你叫袁新，你有能力并希望成為一名講解員。請按要求寫一封自薦信。

要求：

1. 必須寫出三點及以上的自薦理由；

2. 詞數(shù)：80-120詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考要點：

1. 擅長英語（英語水平，溝通能力......）；

2. 熱愛科學（科學知識，創(chuàng)新能力......）；

3. ......

Dear sir,

I’m a junior student from Chongqing Xinhua School. I’d like to become one of your guides.

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I would be most thankful if you could give me the chance.

參考答案

One possibe version:

Dear sir,

I’m a junior student from Chongqing Xinhua School. I’d like to become one of your guides.

I’ve learned English for 6 years. I spend a lot of my free time listening to English news and watching English movies, so I’m good at English. That is to say, it’s not difficut for me to talk with people in English.

I have been interested in science since I was a child. My favorite books are on science. Some new ideas often come out of my mind, which has encouraged me a lot. With these ideas, I have made some small inventions to make my life more comfortable.

Besides, I feel like making friends with different people, no matter where they come from. I’m sure that I will get along well with them.

I would be most thankful if you could give me the chance.

Thank you!

第三篇 如何減壓讓生活更美好

題目要求

許多學習生活中的煩惱都會使人產(chǎn)生壓力,為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學們中存在的心理壓力問題,你們班特意開展了一次以'Less Pressure, Better Life'為主題的英語演講比賽,請你準備發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法,與同學分享,內(nèi)容包括:

(1) 同學們普遍存在的壓力是什么;

(2) 我的壓力是什么;

(3) 我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。

注意:文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。詞數(shù)80~100。

【滿分范文】

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

That’s all. Thank you!

第四篇學做好人好事

題目要求

今年是學習雷鋒五十周年紀念日，雷鋒同志說過：“我要把有限的生命，投入到無限的為人民服務(wù)之中去?！?/p>

請寫一篇意思連貫，符合邏輯，不少于80字的作文。

在作文中，簡單表述你對雷鋒的崇敬之情，為什么向雷鋒叔叔學習以及你在日常生活中是如何幫助他人的。

【滿分范文】

Leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted all this life into his beloved career as well. I, myself, was totally shocked by his character.

Such is human nature; people trace the good, and water flows to low. Everyone should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan “l(fā)earn from Leifeng, our decent idol”, so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict.

To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of Math, to collect homework is my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for shorten the time for teachers when correcting them.

I strongly propose that we shall see a better world if each of us treat Leifeng as our model and copy his spirit.

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