四、每日佳作賞析

Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Your Attitude Towards Criticism . You should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese :
1.每個人都可能會受到別人的批評。
2.不同的人對待批評的態(tài)度是不同的。
3.你怎么看待別人對你的批評。

范文

Every one of us may be criticized by others in our life . (1) For example , (2①) workers who fail to accomplish their tasks may be criticized by their employer ; (2②) students who have poor performance in exams may be criticized by their teacher and parents .

(3) However , attitudes towards criticism (4) differ from person to person . (5①) Some people will become annoyed , and will try to defend themselves (6) by all means . (5②) Some people may (7) be indifferent to criticism . They just regard criticism as nonsense . (5③) But other people accept criticism modestly and find their shortcomings from others' criticism , (8) who (9) tend to (10) stand a good chance of success .

As for me , I welcome others' criticism . I have always believed that old Chinese saying (11) " Good medicine that tastes bitter will help one's illness " . In my opinion , (12) though criticism will make us unhappy , it can help us know our shortcomings and inadequacy . Therefore , we should (13) place more emphasis on others' criticism , (14) instead of being annoyed with or (15) turn a deaf ear to it .

點評
(1)舉例說明。
(2)排比句，結(jié)構(gòu)相同，增加氣勢。
(3)轉(zhuǎn)折引出對批評的不同態(tài)度，使上下文過渡自然，銜接緊密。
(4)意為“各人不同”。
(5)列舉了不責(zé)罵人的不同態(tài)度。
(6)意為“盡一切辦法，務(wù)必”。
(7)意為“無動于衷，漠不關(guān)心”。
(8)who引出非限制性定語從句。
(9)意為“易于……，有……傾向”。
(10)意為“很有可能，大有機會”。
(11)引用諺語“良藥苦口利于病”。
(12)though引出讓步狀語從句。
(13)意為“更加強調(diào)或重視”。
(14)意為“而不是”。
(15)意為“充耳不聞，置之不理”。